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Awesome Personal Statement Examples from the Successful Applications of Past Admission Statements Clients

Quick note: We’ve given these essays little titles like “On Ceremony,” just as a simple way of naming them, since we’ve removed identifying information. Also, traditionally speaking, the structure “On ____” is the fancy-schmancy way of titling personal essays going all the way back to Montaigne, and here at Admission Statements LLC, our fanciness is exceeded only by our schmanciness.

It may seem like we’re violating our own “Truth, Justice, and the American Way” principle, but before you go calling us hypocrites, just know that none of these former clients set out to write “on” anything. They just set out to tell their story: to say something true about who they were and why they wanted to go to law school. We went through and added these titles afterward.

On Independence

“When I was nine, my mom put my younger brother and me on a bus.”

Independence

On Winning

“On the wall of the Utah Blaze locker room is a massive blackboard. Inscribed on the board in large white letters is an inspiring (and very long) sentence.”

Winning

On Debate

“On my last day working at Fox News, a coworker asked me why I was going to law school.”

Debate

On Advocacy

“I don’t know about other schools, but at mine, political philosophy seems to be the ugly step-child of the political science department.”

Advocacy

On Ceremony

“It is October. Two Mondays ago, precisely at ten o’clock in the morning, the Marshal of the Court struck the gavel and announced, ‘Ladies and gentlemen, the Honorable, the Chief Justice and the Associate Justices of the Supreme Court of the United States.'”

Ceremony

On Ideals

“On our second morning alone together, my son stole my glasses.”

Ideals

 

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